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Post by moonshade on Jan 30, 2007 6:54:57 GMT -5
name: Moonshade
gender: she-cat
age: 17 moons
desired clan: ThunderClan
desired rank: warrior
personality: Moonshade though loyal is a prickly young cat who only listens to her friend, Shimmerstream. She is nice to clanmates who can tolarate her stubborness.
description: Moonshade is a long-legged light silver tabby with pale amber eyes. Her paws are have a ginger tint on them and a battle-scarred muzzle.
history: Born a RiverClan cat she had mysterious dreams. One day she was in the forest when she was attacked by a ThunderClan cat named Shimmerpaw. She later joined ThunderClan.
example rp: It was a warm night the perfect night for hunting. Cautiously Moonpaw stepped out of the ferns. " Wow this place is huge." Moonpaw thought. All of a sudden a flash of ginger shot through the undergrowth heading straight toward her! Instinctivly she unsheathed her claws. Then she reconized her friend Shimmerpaw. "Hi Moonpaw! How ya doing in RiverClan" meowed Shimmerpaw. "Shimmerpaw, you shouldn't be here, your going to get us into trouble" hissed Moonpaw furiously.
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Post by Firetail on Jan 30, 2007 10:27:32 GMT -5
If you could just make the history a bit longer, and make the personality and description a bit more detailed, that'd be great. (Warriors aren't given nicknames in the RPs, btw). Thanks. ^^;
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