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Post by Bulletstar on Jan 11, 2007 21:19:35 GMT -5
Heres another one bout a polar bear that I had to write during school
Force eyes open Soft, fuzzy paws Perfectly curved ears A thick coat A bear
Struggle to remeber White, rocky tundra Gone forever
Hard, harsh cages Slam down Forever trapped
Little child Staring in sympathy Red ball Lost
Will break free One day A polar bear Lost Forever trapped Gone But still hope Tiny glimmer of hope I will be free again
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Post by Firetail on Jan 12, 2007 12:14:22 GMT -5
Again, a pretty good free-style! But also again, there is no option for 'pretty good' or something close, so I can't vote..
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Post by silverjet on Jan 17, 2007 8:39:31 GMT -5
it interesting. its kinda suspenseful... but i like it!
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Post by silverjet on Feb 3, 2007 17:22:43 GMT -5
thats it im leaving the site becuz im not getting any attention.
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Post by The Happy Bush on Feb 6, 2007 23:00:13 GMT -5
I like it, like Firetail said....a good free-style poem!
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